It was a cold, dark, rainy night. I was sitting on a bench in a park alone as the rain poured down on me. I was cold and scared as if something or some one were to jump out at me. I always wondered why I don’t have a home and where is my family?… Do I even have one? Those are the questions that run through my head every night.
The next thing I see is a car driving by then another and another. All of a sudden a car comes speeding down the road it is losing control it is spinning It is moving to fast I did not have enough time to move CRASH‼ Every thing went black, I hear loud sirens.
The next thing I know I am in a hospital with a broken arm. The doctor walks in.
“Oh good you’re up” she says.
I ask her “Why am I here and what happened?”
“You got hit by a car.”
“Well what am wrong with me why am I here?”
Another doctor walks in and says to me.
“You broke your arm from the car crash, and you are still here because you have been out side in the cold for so long with no where to go that you have gotten sick and we are researching it because we don’t know what this is, and if we were to let you go and check out of this hospital you would not survive.”
“But wait I have a question.”
“What would that be?” Asks the doctor
“Do I have a family?”
The doctor sighs “You had a family at one point I am very sorry but they have all passed away.” I start to cry and can’t stop I ask
“Well where will I go and what will I do?”
“We are not sure yet but for now here. You will stay here. You are not well. Now get some rest.”
I wake up to a bunch of rushing doctors and I am in a lot of pain. I see blood and pointy tools. A nurse puts a needle into my arm. Every thing became blurry I had fallen a sleep. An hour later I wake up in my room again the doctors say that when I was sleeping they found out what was wrong I had hypothermia. What is that? Hypothermia is when you body tempter drops from being out side in the cold to long. Which led to us having to amputate you’re your leg. “WHAT!” we were rushing because you woke up. So our nurse gave you anesthea so you would not feel any thing and so you could not see anything.
“So is that it I am done?”
“Yes, But you will continue to stay here because you are unable to walk and you have nowhere to go and have no one to take care of you so we will.”
I could not believe that in one day I was hit by a car, rushed to the hospital, broke an arm, got hypothermia, had my leg amputated and found out that all of my family passed away and yet I am sitting here alive and alone. I wonder what was wrong with the driver. And who was it? Are they ok? How did all of my family die? Now those are the new questions that run through my head every night as I sit here in the hospital alone.
I really like it! You have very nice dialog. I like how you said "These are the questions that run through my head" tHE suspense from the car crash is good! Cool story!
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