Today is a beautiful day the sun is out and shining. I am going to the mall today with my friends at 1:00 PM. It is 12:30 I am eating lunch. I can’t wait!! I have a few questions roaming threw my head. What should I wear? What will I buy? Where should we go first? It is 1:00 and I am on my way to the mall. As we pulled into the mall I saw all of my friends outside waiting for me. My mom says
“I will be back around 4:00 so be ready"
I said "ok mom I will be here at 4:00 on the dot".
We walk in the mall and none of us know where we want to go so we just started walking if we saw a store we like we would go in. So we went into American Eagle first. It was really crowded. So we decided to say together threw out the store. Everyone bought a pair of sweat pants and jeans. Next we went into Aeropostale. It was twice as crowed and American Eagle. I walked in and all of the sudden a hand is placed over my mouth and I was lifted off the ground by two teenage boys. I try to scream for help but no one can hear me because their hand is still over my mouth. For as crowed as the mall is no one resizes that if am being kidnapped. We get out side of the mall and they put me inside of a car.
I screamed “Please! Ple-e-e-ease! Please Let Me Out Go!!!”
All they did was laugh. I was in a car with four teenage boys. I was scared. I knew I had my cell phone on me but I did not want them to see me with it and take it because that was my only way of getting help. So I just sat there in silence until we pulled into an old rundown scary place. All I thought was I'm scared. They pulled me out of the car and told me to fallow. I knew I could not run because they were probably faster than me and I did not know where I was. So I did not move I don’t want to go anywhere with them. They looked back in anger. Two of the four came back and carried me into the building. It was a cold and dark area.
I asked them one question "What are you going to do with me"?
They looked at each other and smiled they all said “nothing.”
I was confused.
They explained "We are going to keep you here in a room until we figure that out. “
They put me in a room that has all glass walls so they could see me at all times. All I could think of is how am I going to call my mom and let her know where I am and to get help. So I started to text her.
I said "That I was kidnapped at the mall I need help I don’t know where I am so call the police. Get help". She responded don’t worry we will find you. The police tracked my phone and in a few hours they found me. They boys were arrested and I was safe. I called my friends and told them what had happened to me and that I am ok now. They were all relived that I was ok. That was the last time I went to the mall without an adult.
I like this story, it had some spelling errors but aver all it was great. I liked how the kidnappers were actually 4 teenage boys. If you made this story longer i bet you could put in what the boys were going to do. It was a really awesome story.
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